Leveled Mind Confused Heart
Reviewed by: Delonya Conyers
In Leveled Mind Confused Heart author Angelique narrates the story of Adrienne Whitney a college student experiencing the heartache that is usually found when trying to discern love from lust. At the onset of the story Whitney is a sophomore at a university in Florida trying to maintain a long distance relationship with Elliott, her boyfriend of seven months who’s back home in their home state of Georgia. Although the relationship is fairly new Adrienne has already begun to fill indifferent for Elliott; as evidenced by her lack of excitement upon seeing him again for the first time in months.
Adrienne knows that her relationship with Elliott has run its course but she doesn’t know how to end it. She stays with Elliott although she’s clearly unhappy and almost every conversation leads into a petty argument as a result of this unhappiness. It takes a newfound interest in another student at her university that she meets on-line named Zephyr for Adrienne to finally sever all ties with Elliott. There’s an undeniable chemistry between Adrienne and Zephyr and an easy friendship ensues.
However when the friendship blossoms into friends with benefits confusion rears its ugly head because Zephyr is hesitant to define their relationship as boyfriend/girlfriend. Although Adrienne really desires more she’s willing to accept less and this willingness will end up defining their entire relationship. The back and forth and endless emotional strain that Adrienne places upon herself to hold on to Zephyr drags on for the majority of the novel making for a tedious and at some points redundant read.Another issue that hindered the novel was that the story was told in first person and that the time frame of the story was very inconsistent jumping around creating a very choppy read. Unfortunately the developmental issues detracted from what had the potential to be a powerful novel on the highlighting the damaging effects of staying in an unhealthy relationship.
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